““This is Cadence reporting live from the outdoor art gallery, I am at the “enormous competition” where you have to decorate a big teacup. Here we are looking at a girl with blond hair and a dark coat on. She is painting a big teacup, It has so much detail. It has a gold rim and a line of gold in it. If you think you can be in the competition come down and you can try out I will be here all day, wait I was just informed that there is only 6 more places. Come down as fast as you can”.
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dw (Team100)
3/18/2018 12:28:50 pm
What a great way to think about the story, as a news reporter. I am not quite sure where this story goes next? Will you link it to next week's posting too?
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techgirl102
3/22/2018 08:26:03 am
sorry I did'nt
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Roger Goulstone (Valley School, Pukekohe)
3/18/2018 06:41:17 pm
I really like the way you have based your writing around a news report. You have hooked in the readers well - so many unanswered questions about the competition and what happens next,very thought provoking.
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Mrs Boyce
3/19/2018 03:53:57 am
Hi there,
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Fortune.O
4/23/2018 08:53:18 am
Hi,
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