Jackie
12/16/2017 11:03:43 pm
This was a novel way for me to view and listen to your writing Dirtbikeboy. I like the concept of videoing your work, but despite having fun watching it, the writing still needs a little work for it to capture me - the reader., which is why we write. Try to find time to always check your spelling too - your monkey was fried (cooked up) not fired as I think you intended. (That did make me giggle though!)
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MR DAD
2/6/2018 06:04:41 pm
I wonder who is the monkey dirt bike boy?
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