’Greetings humans of Earth…’ I t ’s me peaky That you sent up to space ! So I sent this message to Earth. I saw some animals Didn’t get some food and water from the kids and adults and teenagers . Endangered species are dying . The water is Way too dirty .The trees are Dying out. The factories are putting gas in the air . I saw Aliens . The aliens are green. They live in mars. They are going to Earth! So you should hide . They are Poisonous . So get a lot of food and water and hide somewhere. From peaky
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Lauren Delaney
11/27/2016 01:22:51 pm
Well done Dabasaurus, this is a great story. I love the way you have used short sentences, exactly how a robot would speak, so it really feels like Peaky the robot is talking to the reader. Lauren Team 100WC
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mlg11
11/28/2016 09:28:50 am
they need water love your story blog until you drop
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